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(Paraphrasing) The chart displays the means used to produce electrical power in China and Spain in 2005 and 2015. (차이점) It is eveident that China relied more heavily on coal than Spain for its energy needs (공통점) and both countries intorduced more renewable sources of enrgy between 2005 and 2015.

 

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1. 도표: graph 를 chart/data로 표현 가능 (data > Chart > Graph 범위 순)
2. 보여주다: indicate (나타내다) = present (알려주다) = illustrate (자세히 보여주다) = display (보여주다)

 

In China, coal made up the vast majority of China's sources for electricity, comprising 80% in 2005, which decreased moderately to 70% in 2015. In constrast, the amount of electricity generated from renewable sources rose from 16% to 25% between the two years. Oil, gas and nuclear energy combined accounted for less than 5% in both years, showing little to no change over the period.

 

Spain, on the other hand, featured much more balance in its proportions. Notably, the change in percetage for coal mirrored China's trend: electricity sourced from coal fell by 10%. However, renewable energy saw a more substantial rise, increasing by 19%. Electricty genration by oil and gas declined from 32% to 23% over the decade. Meanwhile, nuclearpower remained constant at 20% showing no change.

 

 

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25.06.02 연습

 

The chart displays that resources means used to produce electrical power in China and Spain in 2005 and 2015. It’s evident that China replied more heavily on coal than Spain in for its energy needs and both countries introduced more renewable energy resources between 2005 and 2015.

 

In China, coal made up vast majority of its proportion China's sources for electricity, comprising 80% in 2005, whereas it has been fell by 70% which decreased moderately to 70% in 2015. Notably, In contrast, the amount of electricity generated by renewable energy sources has been increased from 16% to 25% between the two years. Oil, gas and nuclear combined accounted for less than 5% in both years, showing little to no change over the period.

Spain, on the other hand, featured much more balance in its proportions. Notably, the change in percentage of for coal mirrored China's trend: decreased from 15% to 10% electricity sourced from coal fell by 10%. However, renewable energy saw a substantial rise, increased from 5% to increasing by 10%. The proportion of Electricity generation oil and gas has been decreased declined from 32% to 23% over the decade. Meanwhie, nuclear power showed reamianed constatnt at 20% showing no change.

 

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25.06.04 연습

 

 

This chart displays that resources means used to produce electrical power in China and Spain in 2005 and 2015. It's evident that China relied more heavily on coal than Spain in its energy needs and both countries intorduced more renewable energy between 2005 and 2015.

 

In China, coal made up vast majority of its proportion China's sources for electricity, comprising 80% of energy resources in 2005, while fell by decreased moderaetly 70% in 2015. In contrast, the amount of electricity generated by renewable sources rose from 16% to 25% between the two years. Oil, gas and nuclear combined accounted for less than 5% in both years, showing little to no change over the period.

Spain, on the other hand, featured more balance in its proportion. However Notably, the power generated by the change in percentage for coal mirrored China's trend: the share fell from 30% to 20% the electricity sourced from coal fell by 10%. Notably However, the proportion of renewable energy has been increased from 20% to 25% in 2025 renewable energy saw a more substantian rise, increasinb by 19%. Electricity generaton by oil and gas declined from 32% to 23% over the period. Meanwhile, nuclear powrer remained constant at 20% showing no change.

 

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25.06.05 연습

 

This chart displays the means to produce electrical power in China and Spain in 2005 and in 2015. It's evident that China relied more heavily on coal than Spain in its energy needs and both countries introduced renewable sources between 2005 and 2015.

 

In China, coal made up vast majority of China's sources of electricity, comprising 80% in 2005, whereas the figure fell by which decreased moderately to 70% in 2015. Notably, In contrast, the energy amount of electricity generated by renewable sources rose from 16% to 25% between the two years. Oil, gas and nuclear energy combined accoutned for less than 5% in both years, showing litte to no change over the period.

 

Spain, on the other hand, featured more balance in its proportion. The amount of power generated by coal, Notably, the change in percentage for coal mirrored China's trend: fell by 10%. Renewable sources, however, was increased from 15% to 20% between the two years. However, renewalbe energy saw a more substantial rise, increasing by 19%. Electricity generation by oil and gas declined from 32% to 23% over the decade. Meanwhile, Oil and gas was nucelear power remained constant at 20% showing no change over the period.